The Windmill's Tale: Part 3
Well I've lost my motivation to write the rest of my story. But I'll tell you how it goes so you know how it goes.
The boy never returns to the field of windmills. The area around the windmills gets industrialized and the air becomes smoggy. After many years the windmills start falling apart. They are covered with a bunch of crap from people and birds.
There is one windmill that sits on the top of the hill. This one loses one of its arms and can never spin again.
2 Comments:
wow. this is quite profound will. it makes me want to seek out a windmill in the dutch countryside or something.
I think this is a good story, or at least the start of a good story. I very much disliked the ending though because it just seems like you got lazy and didn't put much thought into the ending at all. The ending is also very sad =(
Other than that though, nice story Will =P I'm trying to get more people to read it.
-Josh
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